DYSTOPIAN STORY OPENINGS

This learning sequence was developed as a response to the clear need in our Key Stage 3 students’ work for a shift away from narrative-dominant action sequences towards creative writing that evokes a mood and atmosphere, it is provided here for your free use, we hope you and your students have as much fun with it as we did

Student Annotation - Presentation

Student Work - Student Annotated Exemplars

PART SIX: The Final Piece - Printed Versions of the Image Stimuli

1: PREPOSITIONSgrammar-1.html
2: NOUN PHRASESgrammar-2.html
3: ADVERBIALSgrammar-3.html
4: RELATIVE CLAUSESgrammar-4.html
5: SUB CLAUSESgrammar-5.html
LEARNING PLANgrammar-plan.html
FINAL PIECEgrammar-final.html
REFLECTIONgrammar-reflection.html

Click the following link to access examples of students’ work, complete with their colour coded comments and feedback: Student Annotated Exemplars

ANNOTATION

This presentation is downloadable as a self-contained, self-playing, controllable Quicktime file from the following address: The Final Piece - Quicktime Video Download